PLAN
Who are the people in it ?: Where will it be ? : It will be set in Leeds as
a home town setting.
A girl called Holly.
A Mum.
A Teacher.
A Boss.
This girl called Holly has really bad anger and her teacher always told her she couldn't make it she can't do what she wanted and always brought her down. One day her mum said don't worry you can be whoever u want to be and u can make it if u try hard and work for it. It was Holly's birthday in a few weeks she's turning 16 and she moves out and makes her dream come true, she gets a job working with kids being a support worker, her boss believes she has something and she is special and can do what she wants when she puts her mind to it because she is great at her job and ends up helping her old teachers kids, the teacher says sorry i didn't think u could make it i'm glad u stuck at it and got where u wanted to be.
Good plan Alicia but we need to spell (you ) not ( u ) and we can go through your grammar next week.
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